Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: On TL pad (line numbers according to pad)
Workraw: Dog Days' - 13 480 AAC

37
With this union festa is now over, but I would like to create these kind of fun events with everyone in the future.
Hereby the Union Festa has ended, but I would like to keep creating such fun events with everyone.
{shortened the sentence and still keeping the same context.}

38
Union festa's Final Stage.
Union Festa's Final Stage.
{capitalized the F. Final Stage capitalised as it is spoken in Katakana English.}

40
On that night after the performance, the party continued as the excitement level didn't go down until the end.{after the performance?}{yes~}
As the excitement continued on, the night of the party slowly came to an end.
{宴の夜は熱狂のまま終わりを告げました。　}
{owari wo tsugemasu is an sentence pattern(bunkei) which means "marking/spelling the end"}

41
Starting tomorrow we shall go back to the usual calm and peaceful days.{jikan is time so the peaceful and calm times makes sense to you?~}
Starting tomorrow, we shall return to our usual calm and peaceful days. 
{alt: "return to"}

44
Yes.{hai~}
Yes? 
{or, Come in, as it wields such context.}

45
Hero,today you are heading out today with the Princess and the others right?
Hero, you're heading out with the Princess and the others today, right?
{fixed punctuation}

46
Yeah,Becky and the others are now making the packed Lunches.{obentou as a lunch box or packed lunch?~ edit as you wish~}
Yeah, Becky and the others are currently making lunch boxes.
{for a picnic, you'll probably go for lunch boxes}

47
Yeah i took a peak earlier.
I know, I took a peak earlier.
{aa, can be translated as confirmation on last said sentence}

49
Are these clothes?{the are before is a surprised sound ok?~ so i can't tl it~ kore fuku? as in are these clothes alright?~}
Hmm? Clothing?
{He's asking confirmation about the present}

58
For today the whole day enjoy and relax together with Princess and your friends
Today, you'll have to relax with the Princess and your friend for the day.
{as some kind of instruction from your chief}

59
And have fun playing with Princess and Rebecca.
And to have fun playing with Princess and Rebecca.
{adjusted according to previous line}

66
I received them from Éclair.{or rather Éclair gave them to me~}
{both possible, the former is literal while the latter is the interpreted version}

67
Ohh,is that right?
Ohh, is that so?!
{changed into interrobang}

72
The highland picnic tour of the rulers and the Heroes!
The tableland picnic tour of the rulers and Heroes!
{It's translated as "tableland" = flat, wide plains (as opposed to highlands). Edit accordingly.}
{Even lowlands is possible, I guess. Would be +1 for the Dutchies in here}

94
Well then Noir, can you take care to press on the shutter?
Well then Noir, can I entrust you with the shutter?
{or just camera}

104
Well kid we had quite a lot of things going around,
Well, many things have happened with you kids,

105
But it's thanks to you and that little shrimp i woke up,
But I woke up thanks to you and that little descendant, 
{the shrimp is Couver, the descendant (as seen some episodes back)}

112
Oh not at all.
Don't be absurd.
{making a one-liner for this expression)

164
I wanted to give those two girls talk fans as much time alone as possible.
I wanted to leave those two girls' talk fans alone for a moment.
{just a moment, not for a long period}

175
Anyway Princess i think from now on you will need to work really hard,
Anyway, Princess, I think you'll need to work even harder from now on,
{changed sentence structure}

179
The same to you Rebecca if anything happens i will always be help.
Same goes for you, Rebecca, if anything would happen.
{The original Japanese sentence is also an ellipsis}

200
Until i do that i will always be halfly done.
Until that time I'll always be half a man.
{idiom: half a man}

221
Well then i shall be bothering you.{ojamashimasu as in when you enter a house~tee hee~}
All right, I'm coming in. 
{don't translate ojamashimasu literally, it won't be said like that in English speech}

239
It's so warm and happy...
It's so warm, I'm in bliss. 
{this is one of the three possible grammatical constructions with ~te, this one shows a feeling in accordance to some event}

285
I'm sure we'll see each other again soon!
I'm sure we'll meet again soon!
{Shorter version}

363
See you soon!
See you again someday!
{to make it sound vague, no 3rd season announced just yet}


==SIGN== {between 286 and 287}
AM06:31
Earth / England, City of London
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==SIGN== {between 295 and 296}
The same day, PM03:35
Earth / Japan, Kinokawa City, Tokino Street
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==SIGN== {originally line 315}
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=18182063

mai dea								
	purinsesu kuuberu
	
ai kamubatsuku seifutei
shinku ando nanami orusou
uento ho-mu satesufuakutori
satsudo zatsuto ito kyannotto
miit kuuberu
hauebaa itoto isu shinsu
kiyan shiyuari
miito imedeiatorii
hoorudo fuoochiyuneit
~eishionsu

------- (Transcribed with the errors included)
{Making changes according to kana combinations}

My dear 
	Princess Couver
 
I comeback safety 
Cinque and Nanami also
went home satisfactory 
Sad that it cannot
meet Couver
However itt is things
can surely
meet immediately
Hold fortunate
...ations {this sentence didn't finish}

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